It was ok, still a lot of room left for improvement. It was a pretty small level and you could walk on all the roofs, effectively skipping pretty much everything after the 1st checkpoint. A bit more variety in the challenges wouldn't hurt either.
Yet another Proto stage that features him losing it (the shield) at the very beginning. I really did look the cool (pun intended) environment and block fortress background. You had some good obstacles thrown in this Ice-Extra stage like water-geysers, disappearing blocks and block-generators, but they weren't even close to being an intermediate challenge. There were also a couple areas where you can jump off the screen and onto the ceiling, making it easy to bypass some of the more difficult areas, like the one with the disappearing blocks and block-generators.
Difficulty - 3 (I can tell you really tried to make this one your hardest Proto stage) Length - 3 (should have been a little longer) Originality - 3 Overall - 3 >=/ (sorry, it had to be)
All in all, not bad for one of your earliest stages. Keep up the good work, as we all look forward to seeing you improve in your C-Mode stage editor skills. >;)